This is better, or at least I think it is. A thousand words have been added to Wolf Within- enjoy.
~~The staring officers started talking as she made her way down the sidewalk. Not talking about you, she told herself. It didn’t matter if she convinced herself or not. There were too many reasons for them to stare. The first reason, she was alive. The second reason, officers, and civilians alike stared at them as if they were some kind of carnival sideshow. Yea, they were the Phantom squad.~~